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== typos ==
 
  
To prevent adding comments that would become outdated, here is a list of typos (feel free to remove when fixed):
 
 
* ch5 Family: "I do," Ryouko's grandfather's said. "But I agree. It's time for her to go <ins style="background-color:yellow;">to</ins> bed."
 
* ch45 The Body Electric: As for the lack of students, they could extend instruction through high sc<ins style="background-color:yellow;">h</ins>ool. Their old school seemed as good a potential pilot school as any other, and the proposal was approved.
 
* ch47 City of Lights: I hate <del style="background-color:yellow;">it</del><ins style="background-color:yellow;">to</ins> say it, but Mami has one installed, and I don't think she has any idea Machina might be sentient.
 
* ch58 On Trusting Trust: Some Ancients envied her <del style="background-color:yellow;">her</del> simple satisfaction with life.
 
* ch68 Many Paths: ''I still don’t think this <ins style="background-color:yellow;">is</ins> called for,'' it protested, as Kyouko set it down outside the door, gently this time.
 

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