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To prevent adding comments that would become outdated, here is a list of typos (feel free to remove when fixed): | To prevent adding comments that would become outdated, here is a list of typos (feel free to remove when fixed): | ||
| − | * ch45 The Body Electric: As for the lack of students, they could extend instruction through high < | + | * ch45 The Body Electric: As for the lack of students, they could extend instruction through high sc<ins style="background-color:yellow;">h</ins>ool. Their old school seemed as good a potential pilot school as any other, and the proposal was approved. |
| − | * ch47 City of Lights: I hate < | + | * ch47 City of Lights: I hate <del style="background-color:yellow;">it</del><ins style="background-color:yellow;">to</ins> say it, but Mami has one installed, and I don't think she has any idea Machina might be sentient. |
| + | * ch68 Many Paths: ''I still don’t think this <ins style="background-color:yellow;">is</ins> called for,'' it protested, as Kyouko set it down outside the door, gently this time. | ||
Revision as of 08:26, 5 September 2023
typos
To prevent adding comments that would become outdated, here is a list of typos (feel free to remove when fixed):
- ch45 The Body Electric: As for the lack of students, they could extend instruction through high school. Their old school seemed as good a potential pilot school as any other, and the proposal was approved.
- ch47 City of Lights: I hate
itto say it, but Mami has one installed, and I don't think she has any idea Machina might be sentient. - ch68 Many Paths: I still don’t think this is called for, it protested, as Kyouko set it down outside the door, gently this time.
