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== typos ==
== typos ==


To prevent adding comments that would become outdated, here is a list of typos (feel free to remove when fixed):
# ch12 Demon Hunter: "Also, telepathy. Get used <ins style="background-color:yellow;">to</ins> it. Take care of her, the two of you."


* ch5 Family: "I do," Ryouko's grandfather's said. "But I agree. It's time for her to go <ins style="background-color:yellow;">to</ins> bed."
== chapter 69 correction ==
* ch45 The Body Electric: As for the lack of students, they could extend instruction through high sc<ins style="background-color:yellow;">h</ins>ool. Their old school seemed as good a potential pilot school as any other, and the proposal was approved.
 
* ch47 City of Lights: I hate <del style="background-color:yellow;">it</del><ins style="background-color:yellow;">to</ins> say it, but Mami has one installed, and I don't think she has any idea Machina might be sentient.
"among other things telling them that all humans have backups" - this reveal happened in Ryouko's first conversation in Chapter 65 [[User:Icecream17|Icecream17]] ([[User talk:Icecream17|talk]]) 14:21, 24 March 2026 (PDT)
* ch68 Many Paths: ''I still don’t think this <ins style="background-color:yellow;">is</ins> called for,'' it protested, as Kyouko set it down outside the door, gently this time.

Latest revision as of 14:21, 24 March 2026

typos[edit]

  1. ch12 Demon Hunter: "Also, telepathy. Get used to it. Take care of her, the two of you."

chapter 69 correction[edit]

"among other things telling them that all humans have backups" - this reveal happened in Ryouko's first conversation in Chapter 65 Icecream17 (talk) 14:21, 24 March 2026 (PDT)